Thursday, December 21, 2006

The Quantum Mechanic Falls Head Over Heels.

she spins profusely
diffusing energy
in a bounded space
never to cross paths.

Her partner
in this magnetic moment
tumbles synchronously
minds melded fast-
er than light.

Distance shared-sheared
distance shed
a tear for the laws
of minds
blind to the heart
of this matter.

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Anonymous Shirley said...

Hey, I actually think I get it!
...or maybe not. Either way it's a great read and I made my own sense of it!
Stay out of the hot's snowing here today!

Wednesday, December 27, 2006 7:17:00 AM  
Blogger ozymandiaz said...

She's probably just going to use hime to get her temporal problems fixed for free...
And he should know
being a quantum mechanic and all
that no matter how close he holds her
they will never truly touch

great write

Thursday, December 28, 2006 4:53:00 AM  
Blogger bradford said...

Parallel points of view conceptually meet when drawing perspective, laws are clothes put over rights to keep the naked truth covered - I like this imagery exponetially to the word magic masterfully mixed - hippy gnu beer

Thursday, December 28, 2006 7:29:00 AM  
Blogger _Soulless_ said...

I find the titles of your poems a mark of extraordinary wit and creativity. The present one is no exception, especially since the scientific, the romantic, and the philosophical seem here to have met for a grand tea party. *grin* You've pulled it off, pulled me in as a reader. Thank you. ^_^

Tuesday, January 02, 2007 10:47:00 AM  
Blogger Crunchy Weta said...

Shirley - I'm glad you made something of it for yourself(tis praise indeed).Have just filled a pool for the kiddies , and kiddies at heart to plunge into, now if only I can find the G&Ts.
Ozy - loved the bit about temporal problems! As things may never touch, where does QM leave love?? Maybe we really are all one.
bradford = write on brother, and lurve that gnu beer.
soulless - Takes one to know one, I always say. Appreciate your comments a lot.
Thanks all again for your comments.

Thursday, January 04, 2007 4:59:00 PM  
Blogger HL said...

Oh to be a free electronick again
"...Where light waves make a decision
Hidden in a theory of the improbable"

Enjoyed the read, ah titles, "say it in code!"

Tuesday, January 16, 2007 8:03:00 AM  
Blogger lindsaylobe said...

There is a limited amount of poetry which incorporates some physics, so I enjoyed reading your clever poem, Mr Quantum Mechanic.

Mind you I don’t think that’s how particles and waves really behave - once a paticle now a wave -but then they are not generally in a quantum poetic state, the heart of the matter!!

Best wishes

Friday, January 19, 2007 3:24:00 AM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

Been awhile hope all is going as you deisre

Thursday, February 08, 2007 8:45:00 AM  

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