Thursday, July 26, 2007

Warm Air Above, Dew Point Below.

Watching fog's first veil rising timidly
From grassy paddock's patches
Sweeping surreptitiously around the shy valley,
I am reminded of smokers, sitting outside cafes
Trying to hide their guilty secrets
In awkward, downturned, downwind hands,
Novice gambler's hands.

I am reminded that the Milky Way
Once wafted over the Southern Cross
Before being stolen by city lights.

How I long to see smokers standing proud
Animated extroverted and oblivious
Shining social magnets, blazing,
....wherever shooting stars go

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Blogger ozymandiaz said...

Ao, great work. Like this very much. Great imagery and a fun read.

Thursday, August 02, 2007 3:01:00 PM  
Blogger Crunchy Weta said...

Thanks as always oz.. having trouble getting into blogger to comment, but have new password now :-) Cheers

Monday, September 10, 2007 10:58:00 PM  
Blogger Marc said...

Beautiful imagery indeed. Bravo.

Saturday, November 03, 2007 4:21:00 PM  

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