Thursday, June 01, 2006

The Bloody Part of Hell

Screaming red fluid
Emergency ward sunset
Apple bobbing razors
Kaitaia Fire chilly sauce
The jaws of life
Cherry Moana Brandy
Burning a passionlit candle
Rising temperature thermometer
A muscle of magma
No longer a virgin
Escape from PMT
Hand meats mouth
Martian root canal
Glass iron rockets
Goodnight Bela Lugosi
The bloody part of hell.


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22 Comments:

Blogger ozymandiaz said...

We certainly shall miss Mr. Lugosi

Thursday, June 01, 2006 7:05:00 AM  
Blogger katy said...

vampirism indeed.

Thursday, June 01, 2006 5:17:00 PM  
Anonymous Travis Jay Morgan said...

Artistically gory. :) Was that supposed to be "Hand meats mouth" or was it meant to be "Hand meets mouth"? Just curious. This was a very red and juicy poem!

Thursday, June 01, 2006 7:22:00 PM  
Blogger Crunchy Weta said...

Hi Travis< originally I had meets but I changed it- either way it results in a bloody mess, but I felt meats adds just that little extra imagerywise ie a gaping lip or missing tooth. Also originally I considered calling it Red. Cheers.

Thursday, June 01, 2006 8:50:00 PM  
Blogger Cecilia said...

I was left as a hollow carcass stained with the redness of this particular poem. Bloody good, Glenn!!!

Friday, June 02, 2006 12:20:00 AM  
Blogger katy said...

oooh, when i first read this poem it was in white, now it's drentched in blood like font. juciy.

Friday, June 02, 2006 4:17:00 AM  
Blogger katy said...

yes, 'juciy' is the cool new kind of way to spell juicy.

Friday, June 02, 2006 4:18:00 AM  
Blogger Travis Jay Morgan said...

Ooh, I like that you changed it to a fading red. Now it's gushing.

Friday, June 02, 2006 4:38:00 AM  
Blogger Crunchy Weta said...

Cecilia.. owww oowrrrrrrrrrr oww owwwrrrrrrrr
Katy... as little red riding hood said.. my what big eyes you have, and I'm guessing that drentched is part of the cool lexicon too ;-)
Travis....took a couple of attempts to get it right, the html editor didnt want to play ball, glad you like it. BTW why does your picture appear only sometimes?

Friday, June 02, 2006 5:37:00 AM  
Blogger Crunchy Weta said...

Also Katy - I know these things amuse you - the code then was kfcyiq..hilarious.

Friday, June 02, 2006 5:38:00 AM  
Anonymous Travis Jay Morgan said...

My picture only appears when I comment with my blogger account.

Friday, June 02, 2006 5:49:00 AM  
Blogger rch said...

Hey Glenn, I like the red effect, takes all the great imagery to new level. A bloody banquet for the mind!

C-ya

Bob

Friday, June 02, 2006 1:34:00 PM  
Blogger Scheherazade said...

Are lost virgins resigned to the bloody part of Hell?
Ah, me. I think I prefer Dante's second ring.
Love "martian root canal."

Friday, June 02, 2006 3:06:00 PM  
Blogger Crunchy Weta said...

Oh my goodness yes, that would be some kind of hell indeed !

Saturday, June 03, 2006 5:09:00 AM  
Blogger katy said...

drentcheded, juciy, squidgey, all sorts of extra and mixed up letters. you love it.

mvgvxwn

Saturday, June 03, 2006 7:21:00 AM  
Blogger Crunchy Weta said...

Endrentcheded icjuy squelsh
parsifluous renwhy meliquirice

Monday, June 05, 2006 4:30:00 AM  
Anonymous DewyKnickers said...

Interesting poem, I actually got the impression of a first date, sex and a car wreck.

Rose

xo

Thursday, March 08, 2007 3:29:00 AM  
Blogger Clockworkchris said...

I fell in love with the line "Martian root canal" because it was so original but the whole poem is that way. Loved it.

Thursday, March 08, 2007 3:56:00 AM  
Blogger leonie said...

Mmmmmmmm.... Kaitaia Fire. It all reads bloody and macabre to me. I like it.

Thursday, March 08, 2007 7:38:00 AM  
Blogger gautami tripathy said...

I like it for its effect.

Thursday, March 08, 2007 9:14:00 AM  
Blogger Natalie said...

It's amazing what your imagination can come up... I never thought of these things when thinking of red, so many different images.

Thursday, March 08, 2007 1:58:00 PM  
Blogger Kimberley McGill said...

Better than good! ah, beautiful gore. Well done.

Saturday, March 10, 2007 6:46:00 PM  

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