The Bloody Part of Hell
Screaming red fluid
Emergency ward sunset
Apple bobbing razors
Kaitaia Fire chilly sauce
The jaws of life
Cherry Moana Brandy
Burning a passionlit candle
Rising temperature thermometer
A muscle of magma
No longer a virgin
Escape from PMT
Hand meats mouth
Martian root canal
Glass iron rockets
Goodnight Bela Lugosi
The bloody part of hell.
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posted by Crunchy Weta at 6:21 AM
21 Comments:
We certainly shall miss Mr. Lugosi
vampirism indeed.
Artistically gory. :) Was that supposed to be "Hand meats mouth" or was it meant to be "Hand meets mouth"? Just curious. This was a very red and juicy poem!
Hi Travis< originally I had meets but I changed it- either way it results in a bloody mess, but I felt meats adds just that little extra imagerywise ie a gaping lip or missing tooth. Also originally I considered calling it Red. Cheers.
I was left as a hollow carcass stained with the redness of this particular poem. Bloody good, Glenn!!!
oooh, when i first read this poem it was in white, now it's drentched in blood like font. juciy.
yes, 'juciy' is the cool new kind of way to spell juicy.
Cecilia.. owww oowrrrrrrrrrr oww owwwrrrrrrrr
Katy... as little red riding hood said.. my what big eyes you have, and I'm guessing that drentched is part of the cool lexicon too ;-)
Travis....took a couple of attempts to get it right, the html editor didnt want to play ball, glad you like it. BTW why does your picture appear only sometimes?
Also Katy - I know these things amuse you - the code then was kfcyiq..hilarious.
My picture only appears when I comment with my blogger account.
Hey Glenn, I like the red effect, takes all the great imagery to new level. A bloody banquet for the mind!
C-ya
Bob
Are lost virgins resigned to the bloody part of Hell?
Ah, me. I think I prefer Dante's second ring.
Love "martian root canal."
Oh my goodness yes, that would be some kind of hell indeed !
drentcheded, juciy, squidgey, all sorts of extra and mixed up letters. you love it.
mvgvxwn
Endrentcheded icjuy squelsh
parsifluous renwhy meliquirice
Interesting poem, I actually got the impression of a first date, sex and a car wreck.
Rose
xo
I fell in love with the line "Martian root canal" because it was so original but the whole poem is that way. Loved it.
Mmmmmmmm.... Kaitaia Fire. It all reads bloody and macabre to me. I like it.
I like it for its effect.
It's amazing what your imagination can come up... I never thought of these things when thinking of red, so many different images.
Better than good! ah, beautiful gore. Well done.
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